Like a quick-sand, she sank me in black and white...
Like violent tempest, she sealed my fate with a back-bite,
Like an erupted volcano, she shook my heart....
Like an injured player, I am completely hurt;
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Another great poem, , I like some of the words, are really amazing.. You portraited about a bitten love.. (She is a twist in the tale of a horror flick Like an erupted volcano, she shook my heart.) really prove it as a bitten love.. Top marks again...10+++
Love bites, love hurts, but also without love we cannot live and progress. Both poems are written well, for such heartache you must have felt...
Thank you you Jacqueline Broad for such a beautiful comment on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍