Wednesday, October 26, 2011

Love Shock: Bitten By The Bug Of Love! (Part-2) Comments

Rating: 4.8

Like a quick-sand, she sank me in black and white...
Like violent tempest, she sealed my fate with a back-bite,
Like an erupted volcano, she shook my heart....
Like an injured player, I am completely hurt;
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Harindhar Reddy
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Jacqui Broad 01 December 2011

Love bites, love hurts, but also without love we cannot live and progress. Both poems are written well, for such heartache you must have felt...

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Harindhar Reddy 21 May 2020

Thank you you Jacqueline Broad for such a beautiful comment on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Vipins Puthooran 27 October 2011

Another great poem, , I like some of the words, are really amazing.. You portraited about a bitten love.. (She is a twist in the tale of a horror flick Like an erupted volcano, she shook my heart.) really prove it as a bitten love.. Top marks again...10+++

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Harindhar Reddy 21 May 2020

Thank you my friend Vipins for a nice comment on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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