Love Seesaw Comments

Viva l'amour Patricia. Love can bite so deeply that the world stops. Love can be so serene that the world is bliss. But Oh! When love has had it's day it's great to feel that freedom to set off on the chase again. Love it. Well written.

I am so happy you had pointed this particular poem out to me, because I love it! It is so true, and explains this emotion and game perfectly! And I do agree, it reminds me of more than a few of my past written poems....from the Game....to 'moonlight memories'....saying we both have a similar view of this powerful emotion! Thank you for sharing your take on it all!

Creativity, truthfulness soothing heart and mind felt as if travelling through the sea...deep blue lovely 10

I believe I commented on this poem but infortunately deleted. I dont remember what I wrote, but for sure this an exquisite poem! Bravo!

I read this, look down and up my chin with feel so good, they write that you tell all in nice way and true too..creative i would say is a based structure for this poem_SOul

Love can go up and down and round and round. We must move with it and enjoy every moment. Thank you.

'Never go for a ride on love until you're good and ready'- a sound advice! This sweet rhyming poem is not simply melodious in tone, but weighty in content too!

lovely! ! ! Yes Love is like a seesaw that goes up and down and you really need to be careful or else you'll fall; Love can be unsteady and can break your heart. So you should be ready before you enter the world of love. I loved it! ! !

Good rhythm goes through all the stanzas, making the poem enjoyable to read and making the reader flow within the words-just like the metronome taps the rhythm of the piano or even better just like being on the sea saw itself :) Regards ~Besa

Love is like a see saw ride with its ups and downs. Good imagery here. You covered the subject extremely well. Will rate this one high

In this fabulous poem of Love Seesaw you have examined all aspects of love in all conditions which is highly captivating!

The reasons stated here are suffice to prove, Loved and lost is better than not to be love at all.

love can be like a seesaw and if you want to play it safe, just sit in the middle and you won't fall on your face. excellent write!

Love is really like seesaw. One part is seen, and the other unseen. A nice comparison! The rhythm of the poem is fabulous!

So beautifully written.... but so so so difficult me to understand.... please provide glossary...

Enjoyable read Patricia - very good rhythm and rhyme.

I just LOVE your rhythm in this poem! It sticks out like a thistle amidst millions of miles of sand :) but the rhyming was good too! -Titi