Saturday, January 17, 2009

Love.....Save Me This Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Swirling, Swirling turning through time
Day becomes night without any sign

in the blink of an eye, joy slips to pain
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Debora Johnson
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Greenwolfe 1962 17 January 2009

This is just a wonderful poem. The kind of rhythm and rhyme I love. I picked a good one to read. Congratulations! ! ! GW62

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John Smith 17 January 2009

Wow! Simply stunning. Amazing rhythm and flow. A definite ten!

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Debora Johnson

Debora Johnson

Zanesville, Ohio
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