Friday, June 9, 2006

Love's Withdrawal Comments

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A skillfully loosed dart
flies from my bow-strung tongue
straight through your heart.
More sure than Cupid's arrow long ago
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Troy Younts
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Leslie Solomon 24 September 2006

Old friend, I want you to know how proud I am that One of Us never lost the spark of creativity that used to drive us all. I read some of your peom here contained. I am, by no means, an expert of meter, rhyme, content or theme-but I can say these poems strike me as at least as good as published stuff I've seen. If you get this message and would like to contact me, my email gets to me at the address ll_solcorp@yahoo.com

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