Monday, February 6, 2006

Love's Wine Wedded, Happiness Spilled! Comments

Rating: 2.8

Love's Wine Wedded, Happiness Spilled!
Grape liquid spilled, staining a blotch so
pink or pale, Remnant to a loving couple's
romantic night's frollicking tale! Those
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Michael Gale
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THE WINE SAGA DOTH CONTINUE...WHENS THE WEDDING, SIR MICHAEL? WHAT I LIKE MOST ABOUT THIS PIECE, EVEN MORE THAN ITS FINE-FLUXED STRUCTURE...IS THE MESSAGE YOU EVERSO SUBTLELY DELIVER...MORAL CONSUMATION OF LOVE...YOU DON'T PREACH IT AS THE PRINCIPAL PLAYER TO THE POEM, BUT THE SEED IS INDEED PLANTED FOR MESSAGE & HEEDENCE...LOOKY HERE, A TEN SHE DOES POP UP, AGAIN...I SALUTE THE MANTRA GOOD SIR M.''''''''''FRANK

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Michael Gale

Michael Gale

Chicago Illinois/Oklahoma City.
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