Love's Warning. Comments

Thank you all for the comments. Deluke Muwanigwa I will take into consideration your advice. I hope it will improve my writing.

For the risk of true love to adorn. Has been made as walking in a rose garden filled with only thorns.....beautiful expression about love; expressive the hidden meaning

Nice one. I think though if phrases could be shorted the reader will be haunted more...like Ego ear wont hear it......this way you achieve both dramatic effect and the ear/hear alliteration makes reader go aha..nice Good poem

A well written piece. Truly marvelous...10++++++