Friday, September 24, 2010

Love’s Voyage Comments

Rating: 3.0

As once I sat upon the shore
There came to me a fairy boat,
A bark I never saw before,
Whose coming I had failed to note,
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Christopher Pearse Cranch
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Doris Cornago 28 July 2017

I see myself on this boat. Thank you for the surreal poem which truly helped me ease up the pain. :)

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Md Shahadat Hossain 28 July 2017

wow! Preety Amazing...loved that writing style.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 July 2017

In the tide! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Paul Amrod 28 July 2017

A beautiful rendition of a seafarer's fantasy enthralled with imagination's playful spree.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 July 2017

Ah, from this island if I veer Into the seas of worldly strife, Give me the bark that brought me here, Where now the tried and faithful wife Year after year renews the lover's lease of life.... touching and amusing presentation. Thanks to his soul.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 July 2017

Such an interesting poem posted here... Thanks for sharing....

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Rajnish Manga 28 July 2017

And landed me upon a world By other stars and a moons endiamonded, impearled. For on that shore a maiden stood, Who smiled with sympathetic glance, Where now the tried and faithful wife Year after year renews the lover's lease of life.... //.... Enchanting narrative like we are through an awesome fairy tale. Nicely crafted poem partly quoted above. Thanks.

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