Tuesday, May 21, 2013

Love's Tongue Comments

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Fond of your beauty I deem it wise
To stir your emotions so may rise
And by making little compromise
You may turn to me your charming eyes
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mohamad tabatabai
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Shahzia Batool 29 May 2013

Never be ashamed of what you are No one is better than you so far Foolish shyness everything may mar Don't be with your feelings at war Now with everybody you'r on par @POETS NOTES: you know so many things already, poetic sensibility is a shared thing, language does not matter, thiis is shown by this your first attempt! Good! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 25 May 2013

A lovely write for a first trial, it can offer more in the next writing...a nice poem, keep it up_Soul

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