Wednesday, September 18, 2013

Love's Sweet Disguise Comments

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In the process of ridding my mustache of white
To pluck as many and bring black to sight
I had dug too many holes on that stretch
To present the mirror with a perfect wretch!
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Lorraine Colon 19 September 2013

Great story you tell here. I'll be smiling all day!

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Khairul Ahsan 18 September 2013

'But the story here didn’t come to a close It yielded love’s another sweet disguise Whole day I smelled her eyes in my nose A strand of my mustache she bore in her eyes! Nice and sweet! :)

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Dave Walker 18 September 2013

This really put a smile on my face. A great poem.

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