Friday, February 12, 2016

Love's Source Of Fear Comments

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When mom walks far new baby cries
It might believe it loses milk and care
If it tumbles her heart falls from highs
She jumps to prevent bad affair
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Kassem Oude
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Lorraine Colon 13 February 2016

Love of different things can be a source of fear, the fear of losing that which we love. The most notable are well-defined in your poem. A very well-structured poem. I enjoyed reading it.

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