Tuesday, February 26, 2019

Love's Rhythm Comments

Rating: 5.0

His heart dances on the curve of her hips
How innocent his moves are
How will he reach the lips?
He wishes to play the music
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M. Asim Nehal
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Shamit Ganguly 26 July 2020

Wonderful sentence and loved it

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Mihaela Pirjol 27 February 2019

" His heart dances on the curve of her hips" ......what can be said? .....only, WOW!

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Mihaela Pirjol 27 February 2019

Beautifully composed nonet. The first verse of the poem, has an impact of a thrilling sensation! Wow! Reading your poems is almost like falling in love!

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Unwritten Soul 26 February 2019

The poem written with so much cute act and lovely feelings..it is a love`s rhythm for sure!

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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