Thursday, October 18, 2018

Love's Ponder Comments

Rating: 5.0

Golden rays fallen free on her
reflected out making no use of
Rays, cast out from sunlit moon
not hording a bit for herself
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Valsa George 13 November 2018

A magnificent piece of poem on the beauty of a beach side and the waves rising in an ocean! It is love that stirs mind and Nature to send out waves of beauty. The land reserves no portion of this love or beauty but gives it away for all to enjoy. A sure 10

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 13 November 2018

Thank you Valsa for your enlightening comment.

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Susan Williams 01 November 2018

computer flipping from poem to poem- -will say more later

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Susan Williams 01 November 2018

Moonlight strewn beach in golden hue lies stretched and opened to all directions Under the sun and moon, and on the beach amongst waves, swaying and rolling lingered the Muse of love, glimmering - - - - gorgeous! ! ! ! !

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 01 November 2018

Thank you Susie for your enthralling and encouraging words.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2018

Love always motivates mind reflecting golden rays. We love nature's reflection and this poem is a great poem...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 October 2018

This is really a beautiful poem on love and nature having touching expression. I cite..... Moonlight strewn beach in golden hue lies stretched and opened to all directions Under the sun and moon, and on the beach amongst waves, swaying and rolling lingered the Muse of love, glimmering Thank you dear sir for sharing this gem.10

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 23 October 2018

Thank you Kumar for the generous comment, as you have always been made on my poem.

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M Asim Nehal 19 October 2018

Awesome poem nicely backed by amusing picture. I quote: Moon being unaware, it was sun's emission So was the ocean, yet inadvertently though ocean receiving it caused, waves gleaming Neither sun nor moon, demanding for effects brought about on ocean waves Nothing less than 10+++++++++++

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 19 October 2018

Thank you Nehal for your expressive comment.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 October 2018

Jayatissa, such a wonderful poem..........

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 19 October 2018

Thank you Bernard, for reading mine and commenting.

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Kelly Kurt 18 October 2018

A beautiful, personal description.

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 18 October 2018

Thank you Kelly for your encouraging words.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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