Love's Philosophy - I Poem by C. P. Sharma

Love's Philosophy - I

Rating: 5.0


Love is not a kiss or sex,
Love is not a muscle flex;
It is just a heart’s reflex,
Distrust always love annex.

Don't tax too much your love,
Don't make it a greedy dove;
Love's nest is treasure trove,
Love's integrity is all above.

Love is not a craze for car
It's steadfast as pole-star;
Love doves are never at war,
Real love is never bizarre.

Don't make your love complex,
When in love you never vex.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 16 July 2008

complete love doesn't demand anything in particular in return...a well worded definition for good sincere love

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Chitra - 19 July 2008

wonderful composition

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Sandra Fowler 19 July 2008

A fine defination of love. I like your style. Warm regards, Sandra

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Eyan Desir 01 February 2009

sweet lines.. good work men

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 October 2008

An excellent piece on love. 10+

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Onelia Avelar 15 September 2008

I was very impressed by one sentenze especially (among the all wise definitions of love) 'Real love is never bizarre'. I was never thinking that way - if bizarre love could be true/real and what is bizarre? It is a very interesting philosophical point. The whole poem is enjoyful. I go to the next, Part II ->>

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Lynda Robson 23 July 2008

I think you have summed up love very well here, it can be whatever you make it, good write,10 Lynda xx

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Abha Sharma 19 July 2008

A thought, well framed in poetic language with perfect rhyme and rhythm. Shakespearean sonnet, revealing true and unconditional love. Abha

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Bissau, Rajasthan
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