Friday, May 22, 2020

Love's Painful Cry Comments

Rating: 5.0

So alone!
Yet,
Always,
Dreaming of love,
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Sandra Feldman
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Khairul Ahsan 23 May 2020

As a poem, it's an outstanding one, and I am so glad to be soaked in its beauty. The thought of pain is also sometimes a beauty, until it is unbearable. But if what has been said in the poem refers to the poet herself, or for that matter any other mortal, my heart wrenches hearing this painful cry, emanating from the afflictions of emptiness, of void feelings!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 May 2020

A well executed poetic expression, dear Ma’am Sandra....10+++

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Susan Williams 22 May 2020

The painful remnants /Of an empty, - - - -> you have a talent for picking out the best words to use- - painful remnants is an awesome and powerful phrase to use......a sensitive write as always, my dear Sandra! ! ! !

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