Monday, January 30, 2012

Love's Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh it was really hard,
To see you walk out that door.
But one thing i know for sure,
With each day you're gonna love me more.
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Jenny Gordon 30 January 2012

Reminds me of the fellow I cannot forget, who still flavours my life for that exact sentiment. Yet he likes to remain elusive, and besides, you said to leave it to Daddy, and Daddy said never. My heart.....well. This is very, very beautiful, wonderfully poignant, laden amply with apt imagery and excellent metaphors. I really, really like it.

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