Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, November 10, 2009

Love's Logical End Comments

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No one may be able to define what is called love
Person may float on the water like dove
He may not be certain or for sure
Will that be simple attachment, sacred or pure?
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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bye bye... bye bye 01 January 2010

Love is a mistery... nothing to do with our logical side... love is impossible to grasp... when you feel you can capture love, it´s probably already gone.... I liked the original lines 'You had dreamt or desired it as fish Remained in sea bed with simple wish'

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Jasmin Bell 04 December 2009

to love is to destroy, to hate is to forget....great poem

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Marieta Maglas 30 November 2009

Nothing likes to rule than to be ruled 10

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george george 30 November 2009

A very different angle on the nature of love. I read it through a few times and found a different shade of meaning each time. A pleasure to read!

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Hari Khabrani 18 November 2009

Logically the love is induction from soul but poet is not fully conceived the full meaning of love and has given the deduction/reduction to the love with his words..... We should rise above and uphold the real value.... Then only he/she may find right place and due

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Louis Rams 17 November 2009

nothing likes to rule than to be ruled. a ten

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Bhanubhai Montu Shah 10 November 2009

Basic instinct may remind her of grave danger She may prove honest emissary and love manager She may rule as queen in lonely kingdom Love may infuse new lease of life out of boredom

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Mahananda Pittle Jaswantlal 10 November 2009

She may rule as queen in lonely kingdom Love may infuse new lease of life out of boredom

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Chand Shikari 10 November 2009

Love is blind but may not eclipse She may always greet but never point out lapses

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Ritul Soni 10 November 2009

She may dominate and swear in It may be combination of intelligence and brain Love is blind but may not eclipse

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Pittle Shaileja 10 November 2009

Basic instinct may remind her of grave danger She may prove honest emissary and love manager

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Sejal Kapadia 10 November 2009

Basic instinct may remind her of grave danger She may prove honest emissary and love manager

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Bharati Bhikhubhai 10 November 2009

He may not be certain or for sure Will that be simple attachment, sacred or pure?

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Kranthi Pothineni 10 November 2009

Love is not blind - it sees more, not less. But because it sees more, it is willing to see less.

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Kamlesh Ambalal 10 November 2009

No one may be able to define what is called love Person may float on the water like dove

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Ramesh T A 10 November 2009

Beautiful write on love! Especially these lines are very nice to read: 'We will make it as heaven on soil Win the hearts with smooth sail Moon should feel jealous and hide the face Seek refuge in clouds and go out of race'

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rago rago 10 November 2009

very beautiful write and delivered in good passion...............

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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