Thursday, July 31, 2014

Love's Journey Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fragrance of love pervades alike
The breath of young, old and senile
In heart full of emotions, like sky full of cloud
A glance, a wink, a flattery of word
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Savita Tyagi
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Susheela Shiju 23 October 2018

wow! enjoyed reading dear! God bless

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 May 2018

A stunning expression on love and has been made startlingly. I love the lines below...... Both had stories of a life time to tell But nothing of that sort happened Only a smile was exchanged Their hearts became featherlight Taking delight in each other's smile On cafe window rose A faint reflection of flying dove Love had spoken in true form. Beautiful poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 May 2018

A stunning expression on love and lost has been made startlingly. I love the lines below...... Both had stories of a life time to tell But nothing of that sort happened Only a smile was exchanged Their hearts became featherlight Taking delight in each other's smile On cafe window rose A faint reflection of flying dove Love had spoken in true form. Beautiful poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 02 August 2014

Their hearts became featherlight Taking delight in each other's smile Sharing company, sharing a word, or sharing just glances will erase the dread of loneliness. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Patricia Grantham 02 August 2014

Oh! I really enjoyed this beautiful poem. So much beautiful and alluring lines. It was expressed so eloquently. Loves does not always come from the male gender. Can also be expressed in other ways. Loved it.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 August 2014

Only a smile was exchanged Their hearts became featherlight Taking delight in each other's smile Lovely lines of a beautiful poem.

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n heart full of emotions, like sky full of cloud.. nice lines....10 love is like river in spate that clearly relates love can bring in flood and maroon the neighborhood

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Gajanan Mishra 31 July 2014

each other's smile - nothing but love, thanks.

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