Wednesday, September 16, 2015

Love's Intimacy Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh mirror, mirror on the wall
Break open my guarded seal
Pray tell, who am I, after all?
Stripping masks that conceal
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 19 September 2015

Verily, accepting the truth is a great virtue, Loved reading the poem........................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2015

Let’s strive for our souls’ unity Therein lies blissful happiness Let trust thrive in our honesty For love peaks in togetherness.......true dictum. A brilliant poem so nicely depicted. Thanks for sharing such an intensive poem. .......10

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Rachel Hill 16 September 2015

Beautiful poem that say's it all...ALL TIME AND EFFORT ARE ALL WORTHY composing this poem...

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Miraj Raha 16 September 2015

My goodness, how did you write this, the strict meter and rhyme flowed exceptionally well throughout the poem.And the meaning is all the more profound.you are a truly gifted author.

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Anita Sharma 16 September 2015

love the mirror on liked it

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Anita Sharma 16 September 2015

good write liked it much

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Anita Sharma 16 September 2015

this is fantastic write

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