Thursday, November 13, 2008

Love`s Heat Comments

Rating: 4.8

because of the heat of your love
my heart had melt
i knew not what`s happening
but i knew what i felt
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Tareq Jalabi
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Sandra Zavec 12 September 2009

I like all your poems, but there's something special about this one...very well written

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 30 December 2008

Lovely poem! I enjoy reading it.

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Kesav Easwaran 26 November 2008

subdued in love...but the feelings there of strongly expressed...a good romantic piece to read...10

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Arin Tumanuvao 24 November 2008

Wow, it seems ur experienced in the 'love' department....good job, and keep writing.

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Monlano Kim 23 November 2008

With all your love poems I say that you're a romantic guy in need of a perfect soul mate that understands you! I love your poems...very passionate.

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Marria Attar 22 November 2008

Wow...Wonderful poem, very well written, Great Job!

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Reina Lorenzo 22 November 2008

hmmm. great piece, well penned..

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 20 November 2008

I love the line about the eagles eggs.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 20 November 2008

i love this poem. it shows true emotion and experience nice one

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i really like this one its one of my favorites i love it....

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 17 November 2008

Great write by u! Thanks for sharing. I am fine, only a bit held up by my work at this part of the year.warmest regards to u.

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Ency Bearis 17 November 2008

great concept of passion..nice write/ rhymes...great one..A10 Ency Bearis

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Evaughn Gray 16 November 2008

wow, blue eyes it was great i love the rhyme in it, it's a 10 on my scale! ~ Love Hazel G.E

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Amanda Shields 16 November 2008

i really liked this i would say it is one of my favorites of yours... keep up the good work

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Susan Jarvis 16 November 2008

Rhythm, rhyme and a heartfelt message - well done! S :)

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Anjali Sinha 16 November 2008

Fiona says it right unrequited love is really painful +++++10 regaards anju

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Fiona Davidson 16 November 2008

Unrequited love is always deep and painful...this shows us a beautiful description of it...thank you...

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Min Sia 16 November 2008

Love's heat is really in this poem! Great words..that emotions are uprising!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 15 November 2008

This poem has depth and you could show some difference from routine......good. Please take a look at my ATONEMENT, somehow similar to this.........10

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Ershad Mazumder 15 November 2008

Thanks for the feeling you have expressed in this piece. I appreciate your feelings.But it has failed to grow as a poem.

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