because of the heat of your love
my heart had melt
i knew not what`s happening
but i knew what i felt
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subdued in love...but the feelings there of strongly expressed...a good romantic piece to read...10
Wow, it seems ur experienced in the 'love' department....good job, and keep writing.
With all your love poems I say that you're a romantic guy in need of a perfect soul mate that understands you! I love your poems...very passionate.
i love this poem. it shows true emotion and experience nice one
i really like this one its one of my favorites i love it....
Great write by u! Thanks for sharing. I am fine, only a bit held up by my work at this part of the year.warmest regards to u.
great concept of passion..nice write/ rhymes...great one..A10 Ency Bearis
wow, blue eyes it was great i love the rhyme in it, it's a 10 on my scale! ~ Love Hazel G.E
i really liked this i would say it is one of my favorites of yours... keep up the good work
Fiona says it right unrequited love is really painful +++++10 regaards anju
Unrequited love is always deep and painful...this shows us a beautiful description of it...thank you...
Love's heat is really in this poem! Great words..that emotions are uprising!
This poem has depth and you could show some difference from routine......good. Please take a look at my ATONEMENT, somehow similar to this.........10
Thanks for the feeling you have expressed in this piece. I appreciate your feelings.But it has failed to grow as a poem.
I like all your poems, but there's something special about this one...very well written