Sunday, September 8, 2013

Love's Heartache Comments

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Rough brown branches of the tree in the middle of the flowing greenish soft grass
Breaking down with blue clear tears washing away the beauty
The sweet smell of the wonderful tree grows greyish and lonely
Love with the colorful fish fading away with blues of sorrows
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Scotty Dogg 11 September 2013

Very nice metaphor with the tree. Terrific poem!

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christina weinke

christina weinke

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