Thursday, January 26, 2017

Love's Fury Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a raging tempest
your ocean's waves
crash against the barren rocks of my soul.
As I breathe you in
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Anthony Burkett
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Annette Aitken 31 January 2017

What beautiful visuals you paint here with your words, so vivid, so real, I can almost feel the waves crashing against me, great write, excellent read. Annette

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Mihaela Pirjol 27 January 2017

'' In a raging tempest your ocean's waves crash against the barren rocks of my soul. '' - fantastic imagery! This poem is intense, urgent, ardent.....a cascade of emotions through each line! Lovely!

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