Love's Fortune Comments

With you I make my time and seed, Fortold by you the love I need. Rachel Ann Butler

I am finding writes that are you, but a different side of you. affection well conveyed within you words.

The flow of words are so smooth that the poem sooths the reasers

A melodious lovely poem on love. Love is the core desire of human being, a basic need, an art, a spore of art, a dream, a hope, and what not. I love it, it's lyrical flow. Bravo.

wow! Such a great piece! I fell in love with it!

Wolfey....what an absolutely beautiful poem! ! ! ! I love this one. However...I note that I cannot vote on it... Hgs, Dee

If only we could always count on someone new bringing love, it would make moving on from another so much easier...thoughtful and sometimes snarly write...Coach

This is amost excelent write GW, I too could not find the vote box, Well deservin' a 10

i couldnmt find the voting box... so i thought i would leave you a comment... so here it is.. your writing is very engaging and interesting... it makes the reader want to read more... good job

Most lovely poem. HG: -) xx

There's something so sweet about your work that one can only feel it and yet not put one's finger on it. The soft lyrical touch or maybe the innocence of true love makles the reader want to go on. Thank you.

Keep writing! I really like your work! !

wow nice i like it. I cant believe it but i get so emmoyional when i read your poems this is the second day im crying

nice flow and the it has that nice taste that you need to read again and again.

Great theme, and your rhythm rolls very smoothly.

Anothe 10 you.though might consider in verse two changing 'told me to before' to ' told to me before' otherwise I wouldn't change a word

New found love for chance to dream lucky man 10 Chris

I love your poetry. This is another great one

The yin and yang of love beautifully collated.

very well versed and a true pleasure to read.......i believe we all have these feelings inside.....you just put soo very well into words for us all! ! thnx for sharing once again! Brian~