Love's Flow Comments
Like a river jumping for joy over shiny grey rocks.
That's how my love felt.
The swirling undercurrent spinning the pearly pebbles every which way,
that's how my pulse raced when I thought of you
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Innovative metaphors...Nice. Keep the poems flowing from you like the river flows to the sea.
Dear Ravi- I am loving your insightful observations and such kind comments - thank you my friend! Lodigiana xx
that's how my pulse raced when I thought of you Meandering, snakelike, it's water flowed along until eventually finding home. That's how myconfusion became resolution Wow such a romantic master piece. Loved it. 10++++ for the lovely poem shared. Subhas
Clearly Subhas you have a romantic soul also! Thank you for your wonderful words and such a pleasure to share it with you xx Lodigiana
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8/3/2025 4:38:43 AM # 1.0.0
Engulfed! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thanks for your kind comments - so appreciate your reading and commenting xx Lodigiana