Monday, February 15, 2016

Love's First Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

Clouds of dreams from minds eye,

silver moonbeams arc the sky
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Chinedu Dike 14 March 2016

Beautiful love piece of poetry depicting the ecstatic feeling of the first romantic kiss, well articulated and insightfully penned in good rhyme scheme with conviction. A lovely portrayal of the beginning of voyage of pure bliss that is love subtly encapsulated in nice poetic diction from inner recesses of the heart. Thanks for sharing Debra. Please read my poem COLOSSAL MISCARRIAGE OF JUSTICE.

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