Luv is a drug
It feels like a hard slug
In the gut
Sewin my heart shut
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I only have one word that shows how u left me in awe...it's: WOW! my favorite line in the poem is this 1: I wanna be alone so I walk it's so peaceful at night when I sneek out to go walking do u really walk to be alone?
I agree, with 'The Hawk' man down below... love usually breaks people, its sad and horrible, but then love makes people too, it mostly breaks me though: ( good write x3, mill
Many young couples dont last long because of this same reason good job!
I guess I just don't see the negatives in this that others do. The clarity is key for me, and it is there. So the meaning is transferred easily. GW62