Monday, August 27, 2012

Love's Desire Comments

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You can see it in his eyes.
The way he loves so hard.
Although, he is afraid, he still gives it his all.
Through the pain he has felt in his heart
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Christina J. Williams
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Kelvin Owusu 28 August 2012

i honestly love reading your work has such a nice feel the last two lines

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