Friday, March 20, 2009

Love's Bouquet Comments

Rating: 5.0

From the sleeping sun you rose,
Like an infant in slumber,
From the whites in a tulip,
Like the sweetness in sugar,
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Reshma Ramesh
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Sandra Fowler 24 March 2009

Excellent use of both simile and metaphor in this romantic write. The last two lines are exquisite. Warm regards, Sandra

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Catrina Heart 20 March 2009

i know that when you came to me this day I saw every colour in the love's bouquet ---------- Sweet and lovely, words smoothly sway in romance...Loved it Resh! ...10+++

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Reshma Ramesh

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