George Krokos

George Krokos

Samos, Greece (Now lives in Melbourne, Victoria, Australia)
Monday, February 5, 2018

Love's Bitter Lemon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Underneath the wild lemon tree
was where I found my love to be.
Lying there with the lapse of time
and the gusts of a winter's clime.
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George Krokos
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Brian Johnston 23 February 2023

No fault love is my answer George. I can love others without needing them to return the favor. But when they do! How sweet is that!

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George Krokos 01 March 2023

I agree with your commentry on this poem too Brian, but just keep in mind it was inspired by some fallen lemons in the backyard. Regards and thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts about the poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 03 April 2018

Bitter lemons are tasted by everyone but we forget them when we get a sweet apple/

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Chris Embrick 12 February 2018

A well crafted write. I think we've all taken a bite from bitter lemons in life. Sometimes you still taste the memory. Thank you kind poet. 10

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George Krokos 12 February 2018

Thanks for reading Chris and your kind illustrative comments. Much appreciated.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 February 2018

A beautifully crafted and well executed write. A love that has not been nurtured through tests of time will turn bitter in.due time. An amazing piece with great rhyme that carries mellifluous sound.10

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George Krokos 11 February 2018

Thanks for taking the time to read and in giving your appreciative comments Rose.

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George Krokos

George Krokos

Samos, Greece (Now lives in Melbourne, Victoria, Australia)
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