Love: Rumination (Radha-4) Comments

Lovely piece you have penned here! Your word choices are spot on and I love the metaphors you have used thoughout the piece. Each one gives it added depth and strength.

Ah, yes, that is very true. Love can be a real game sometimes, especially if you pursue the wrong person. Your poem is very good. It has a lot of truth to it, and it has a lot of emotions. You are a good poet, especially if you are able to present your emotions like that. You did a good job.

Great work! Lovely verse.