Love Protest: Open Letter 2 Poem by Lungelo S. Mbuyazi

Love Protest: Open Letter 2

Rating: 5.0


You broke my heart
- - - - - - - - -
I don't care
If it shatters
Into pieces,
Turn into ashes
Or freeze into ice
If need be

A part of me
Forsee that
I'm in for an
Emotional scar,
Even that in that way,
Your love will turn
My scars into a star

I'd have something
To remind me of you,
For I know that one day
Forever, you'll walk away
Letting the remains
Of our romance memories
Fade like the dewdrops
In the samoset deserts

Tuesday, November 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: letter,loneliness,sabotage,sad love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Simon 02 December 2017

Very intense feeling here....stanza 2 Your love will turn My scars unto a star How's that possible? 10+++

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 24 June 2018

Thanks Simon for commenting on poem... your feedback helps me grow as a poet

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