Tuesday, August 19, 2014

Love Promises, Promises.... Comments

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If you love me true
These you would do:

If you love me, you would buy me a nice car
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Roseann Shawiak 01 February 2016

I believe when you love someone unconditionally you want to do everything in your power to care for and protect them, they never have to ask you for anything. Whatever you give from your heart is appreciated, they are grateful for your love, value you as a person, a lover, a best friend. Having to ask someone for necessities of life shows you what you can expect from them, a life of misery for there's no love to give you, it will be a life of wanting, how can you appreciate or be grateful to someone who neglects your needs, especially that of an unconditional love? ? Again, you have made me think, Paul! You do have a way of getting people to do that through your provocative way of getting people to respond to your thoughts and ideas. It's actually quite ingenious I say, with a smile! Great poem! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Paul Sebastian 04 February 2016

What a loaded appreciation of the poem! Thank you Roseann. Thank you so much! You will agree that wealth, things money can buy are mere gifts expressing love. But expressions. Real love touches the very soul and being, unconditionally. It is so engulfing and overwhelming. It is so powerful that it can do what is thought impossible. That is the power of love.

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Charity Nduhiu 14 September 2014

Sure if you do all those things i am sure she will love you forever.

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Valsa George 20 August 2014

A clever strategy for teaching children conditional clauses in grammar! True love is not conditional Neither it's barely emotional Nor is it used to love things True love grows: inheritance it brings! The gist of the poem is beautifully summarized in these concluding four lines! Yes, true love should not be conditional, but if it has to be abiding, love by itself has to fulfill certain conditions! Enjoyed!

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Akhtar Jawad 19 August 2014

True love is not conditionalNeither it's barely emotionalNor is it used to love thingsTrue love grows: inheritance it brings! A nice write.

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