Saturday, June 15, 2013

Love Potion Comments

Rating: 4.6

Love has cast a spell on me
Drowning in its deep blue sea
Mesmerized by a love so true
Fresh and sweet as the morning dew
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Patricia Grantham
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Elena Plotkin 26 August 2013

Mesmerized by a love so true\Fresh and sweet as Morning Dew\True love will last forever\Will never say no. I love the imagery your poem evokes. Achingly beautiful. A perfect ten!

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Joseph Anderson 26 July 2013

A mesmerizing poem. Brief and nearly hynotic in presentation. The comments should tell you. Love has cast a spell on me-great line. Someone is very lucky

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Valerie Dohren 16 July 2013

A poem full of love - delightful write.

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Valsa George 15 July 2013

A lovely potion which I have drunk to the lees! Enjoyed!

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David Wood 15 July 2013

Love casts a spell that we are all under from time to time. A good write.

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Nader Baheri 12 July 2013

so romantically penned.true love and true lover will be last for eachothers.although the aging or time separates them. ~nb

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Neela Nath Das 04 July 2013

Wow! So nice thought! Love and love.

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Dinesan Madathil 03 July 2013

Let the spell of love last for long as in true love nothing is impossible Patricia.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 23 June 2013

Well penned poem, love all the way. Siya_! !

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Chandra Thiagarajan 23 June 2013

Love Potion is a beautiful poem which every one can relate to.! The rhyming is music to the ears.a wonder ful poem Patricia!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 19 June 2013

True love will last forever Nicely stated. Love never dies. Thank you.

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Heather Wilkins 19 June 2013

love has cast a spell on me. nice thought.

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David Wood 19 June 2013

Love is a many splendid thing, as the song goes. This is a lovely poem and would make a good sonnet to if you chose to write one. Have you read any of my sonnets?

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Passionate Reader 18 June 2013

My love for you will never die It was made just for you and I Our love and trust will forever be Love has cast a spell on me beautiful lines! ! ! yes love works like magic and casts a spell... enjoyable poem! ! ! ! ! !

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Valerie Dohren 18 June 2013

Delightful little poem Patricia - gave me an ah moment.

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Ken E Hall 17 June 2013

Love has cast a spell on me, cos' your worth it...luvli to read nothing in the planet as good as true love. Even birds have it and the pet dog too all true...regards

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 16 June 2013

True love will last forever. Beautiful love poem.

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R.j. Wynn 16 June 2013

Awesome, check out Stardust.

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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