Tuesday, April 8, 2008

Love Poison Comments

Rating: 5.0

A first and then a second dollop of warm and delightful
spiced rum, swallowed from a shot glass and poured
down the chute, with only a modicum of inspiration
as a chaser; provided him the counterfeit courage
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Ted Sheridan
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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

She had loved him when his hair was much longer than his attention span and his fair complexion tanned by a tropical sun smelled of coconuts and passionate hot love… Rachel Ann Butler

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Willie S. would have a curling smile 'cross the lower frame of his stoic visage, if he were able to log-on to poemhunter.com, and read this fine piece, my friend. Sterling Work, indeed, Ted....Flows smooooothe...and it smacks of classic poetics, which i find quite mercurial to digest & or quill! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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