Friday, September 23, 2016

Love Poem Comments

Rating: 4.6

The rain whistled.

A taxi brought me to your apartment building
And there I stood.
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Dorothea Lasky
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Kevin Hulme 30 September 2023

‘Like it had been let out of something awful'. Good Poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 June 2023

Well narrated. Beautiful poem as a love poem. Five stars.

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Rajan T Renganathan 26 June 2023

Very nice poem.

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Sheeya Hacks 26 June 2023

Shades of love in three different ways nicely put together, I liked it.

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Susan Williams 17 October 2016

My day to meet unusual poems! What a blessing to meet an entirely different approach to poetry coupled with a mind that flits from topic to topic until the reader sees at the end that all were threads she wove together in a stunning challenge to our thought processes. I am going to have to read more from this poet.

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Kathy Van Kurin 17 October 2016

Dorothea LaskyLilting Melody was this poem of a song. I felt my own mind explore as I read your words. Pretty fun to find reality within the heart. Blessings in your creativity! .................Kathy

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 17 October 2016

This is one of the modern poems I very much loved reading. Don't ask me why, because modern poems are always beyond questioning. This one has a rare beauty about it. (10)

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 October 2016

A fantastic love poem with love's all the shines and blues. Congrats on it's selection as modern poem of the Day.

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M Asim Nehal 17 October 2016

a wonderful poem deserves all applause.

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 October 2016

But hope does not die till the end. There is hope that soul will come back with a new attire to face the struggle called life. Nice poem.Congrats for selection.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 October 2016

There i stood! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 17 October 2016

Congratulations on being selected for Modern poem of the day.Well done Keep it up Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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