Love Poem 1 Comments

Was it forbidden love? Is that why it was 'sin'? I must read lots of your poems to learn mre about phrasing. Very well written and enjoyable

‘Nectar flavor, was our sin….’ But why? Love is nectar to be sipped with open flood gate of joy. Nice with a but [ vide supra]. dr. sakti

Our love is like wine. Grapes of time, from the vine. ------ lovely description of love, nice simile penned....

true..we are crushed to make this bitter sweet wine..lovely