Sunday, November 23, 2008

Love Or Lust Comments

Rating: 5.0

A love so secret, veiled and dark,
Hidden deep within my heart.
Yet I think I may be wrong
About my heart, my love, my song;
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Alexander Steen Stewart
COMMENTS
Roshni D'Souza 29 April 2009

Once again, stunning in the clarity and the flow of thoughts!

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Venus McHeart 01 December 2008

i love your this one a lot of feeling nice job! ! ! !

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Carissa Mcbride 01 December 2008

this was a beautiful poem. keep writing. -bleeding mascara

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 27 November 2008

Is it love craving of soul for soul or Lust craving of flesh for flesh Cannot be known till you are trapped in mind's mesh. Good work. keep going.

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Carol Rhodes 26 November 2008

ALEXANDER, YES, WELL DONE! YOU HAVE AN INBORN TALENT FOR SELF-EXAMINATION AND DESCRIPTIVE PRESENTATION. YES, A POET YOU ARE. NOT TO LECTURE, BUT OUR BRAIN/ABILITY TO MAKE MATURE DECISIONS DOESN'T WORK FULLY UNTIL THE AGE OF TWENTY-FIVE, SO THE SCIENTISTS SAY. LUST IS A NATURAL INSTINCT AND CAN BE FLEETING. LOVE IS SOMETHING, A COMBINATION OF BOTH LOVE AND LUST, THAT IS COMBINED WITH YOUR SELF-KNOWLEDGE, HER SELF-KNOWLEDGE, WHAT YOU SHARE IN COMMON AND WHAT YOU NEED AND SHE NEEDS TO BE WHOLE IN THE UNION, YES? KNOWING YOURSELVES ALLOWS FOR THE NECESSARY CONTINUING SENSE OF INDEPENDENCE IMPORTANT TO A HEALTHY RELATIONSHIP, I THINK. WE SHOULDN'T COMBINE TO LOSE OUR IDENTITY, BUT TO EXPAND OURSELVES. COMING TOGETHER AS MUSIC AND LYRICS DO, IN OTHER WORDS. THANK YOU FOR SHARING. MY BEST, CAROL

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Kassem Oude 26 November 2008

Very beautiful poem, I prefer this kind of versification, it is the most beautiful, classic poetry is the real and memorable, I cheer you and call on continuing like that. This teen-age feeling is true my dear Alexander. I see you a great poet you will earn reputation.

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Tia Maria 26 November 2008

Talk about many a thought put into words... only one way to find out...10/10 PH friend :)

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Morgan Uptain 26 November 2008

I love it! It's very insiteful and true. You are a wonderful poet. Keep writing. =>

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<font color =fusha>Amy 26 November 2008

you have a great talent for poetry i hope you continue to write

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Viola Grey 23 November 2008

your honesty is refreshing....the line between the two feelings is very fine indeed, both make your blood scream....great work here

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 23 November 2008

Love is when you eat her, sleep her, drink her and everything her...........thats LOVE! ! ! ! ! Well written poem indeed.Keep writing Steen.

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Alexander Steen Stewart

Alexander Steen Stewart

Falkirk, Central Scotland
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