Tuesday, August 21, 2012

Love Or Lust? Comments

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Tell me is it love or lust
I've been through this before, now it's hard to trust
This time it seems real
Tell me is it a hit in run kinda deal
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Joseph J. Hernandez
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Ramesh T A 27 August 2012

At the critical moment this kind of confusion will be common! That experience is well expressed here!

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Rebecca Egbert 23 August 2012

This is my exact internal dialog ;) cheers to u for making it into beauty.

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Zoe Allen 22 August 2012

I love it. I feel like a lot of people can definitely relate to this, especially me. Its now on my favorite poems list. Good job :)

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Darkangel Flyfree 22 August 2012

Good poem, I like it! And it is hard to trust people, I definitely have a hard time with that!

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Jess Howard 22 August 2012

Thats amazing, feel the emotion and its understands how you feel.

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Bethany Buhl 21 August 2012

Yeah it hurts and makes it hard to give someone your heart. Especially when someone else said they would love you. But just because someone else hurt you. Doesn't mean someone else will. I hope you give this person a chance. Everyone deserves a shot to prove you wrong right.

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Joseph J. Hernandez

Joseph J. Hernandez

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