Love Or Lust Comments

this is beautiful ink.a work of sharp and intelligent mine.liked it.

Dear poetess Shirin, liked these lines: Naked flames of romance Which swallows faithful lovers Blessedly eternal May be sometimes blaze or shimmers Brightens the life As it rise heart horizon in heavens real love is always spiritual. but human beings need the body too.. elevate the human to the divine.. this is our call as poets.

for me the dilemma was kindeled by callimachus in ancient rome and came up close face to face near at home in the shape of renderings of Baba bulleh shah.....a renownwed spiritual poet of punjabi... u have done a great job... a potent and evergreen topic..... awesome rendering and a potent heady mix of emotion.. cheers and ten

Breeze waltz with grains of the sand And flames in summers sets a poetic heart to flutter khaili khoob

Hi Shirin, Yes, it's a good poem.The poet's passion is passed on through the vivid imagery utilised.

this is a very interesting poem.. I like your approach.. Les

one of your best, i like it so much, thanks for sharing 10 +++