Love Or Love Comments

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'You taught us peace, patience, joy and gentliness' Rachel Ann Butler

nice and well written keep up the good work

Dear denny, Love is beautiful when innocence rules. When intentions compete, no love is there but pre-meditated actions. Actions and love could not be confused.Love is an Abstract Noun. It could not be followed by a conditional verb. Love should be unconditioned by time, space and....... Love is the end of love, not the means to joy time bound. Love unconditional is love of innocence. Love is beautiful only when mens rea is not there. When there is no hormonal compulsion to do or not to do something that makes or mar the beauty of love, then love becomes divine. Love is in the suffering and kindled by compassion and kindness. It is selfless surrender to the aches and pains of other's desperate state of pain. In love you are the god and not the dog to litter. Littering and puppying and multiplication and all is because of intended actions of man or woman, if you would please. By the way, your poetry is very good by way of style, but by way of content you should know better. Don't be confused between the common man's idiocy thinking love and actions that adheres to love as same.

L onging O r V anished E go

perfect, thats all I can say; ; ; ; ; this poem is great.nice job