Wednesday, January 28, 2009

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so many children in this world
so many little boys and girls
going without food or love
this is'nt what god expected of us.
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Vaibhav Pandey 30 January 2009

great message in this beatiful poem.. 10

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Perfect... You are so right in this poem. very strong and real. I hate thinking about children going without food I wish i could help them all but like most americans I am so poor myself and trying to raise my daughter.. This poem makes wonderful points and I enjoyed reading it.. Thank you Krista

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brother, you nailed it on the head

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