Wednesday, November 12, 2008

Love On The Tracks Comments

Rating: 3.1

Don’t say you love me and use it as a lever
A lever to use in a medieval way
Extracting confessions for sins not committed
Then applying more pressure so you get your way
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JAMES ROBERTS
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Tsira Goge 16 November 2008

JAMES, Charming monologue...... 10...... Tsira

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Lynda Robson 12 November 2008

Good write, great flow, the last stanza is excellent, 10 Lynda xx

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