Monday, March 7, 2016

Love On The Rocks Comments

Rating: 4.3

From a high cliff above the beach we look down
at the waves crashing against the shore. The image
of love on the rocks.
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Theresa Haffner
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Michael Warner 11 August 2016

Great that you are writing poetry at 70, and nice you have written this as if from a man's perspective. Although not factual real life, I had to imagine him as a platonic (without [physically] sexual interest) rescuer of a much younger troubled lady. I dislike a wide discrepancy in age in real life couples. The title is perfect, as it fortells the obvious ending. Pretty crazy to do this in real life, but life is pretty crazy with tiny bits of peace flowing between the never ending lines of magnetic ink.

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Theresa Haffner

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Plainwell, Michigan
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