I will never forget the love i once met
by the castle on top of the hill,
my heart he won at the setting of the sun
and time was frozen still.
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very clever use of rhyms i think this is a good well writen peice a nice slant on how this girl felt keep proud of you up the good work think your parent would be
thank u John for taking the time to read my poem ur comments are gratefully recieved and appreciated! ! xxx