The mirrors would melt with the fire in his eyes
his strong arms enfolded the love that he prized
she took her last breath as her heart flew away
with a kiss that embodied the break of the day
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I can only echo what Patricia and Dalia have said. This is truly beautiful. Love, Fran xx
Beautiful and brilliant write, Charlie. You certainly have a way of expressing the moment in all its glory. Bravo! Linda