Thursday, June 15, 2006

Love On The Dew. Comments

Rating: 4.9

The mirrors would melt with the fire in his eyes
his strong arms enfolded the love that he prized
she took her last breath as her heart flew away
with a kiss that embodied the break of the day
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Charles M Moore
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Linda Ori 24 June 2006

Beautiful and brilliant write, Charlie. You certainly have a way of expressing the moment in all its glory. Bravo! Linda

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Francesca Johnson 16 June 2006

I can only echo what Patricia and Dalia have said. This is truly beautiful. Love, Fran xx

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Dalia Butterfly 15 June 2006

True romance. Beautifully written.

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Patricia Gale 15 June 2006

A wonderful romantic poem. Splendid Charlie! Patricia

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Charles M Moore

Charles M Moore

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