Friday, December 4, 2009

Love On A Leash. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Debarred from showing
their kept-in-check love,
They restrain and muzzle
with reined-in feelings.
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Fay Slimm
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when it is unleash it would be a beast in power and prowess such love prove to the best.

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Patti Masterman 04 December 2009

Such great metrics in this and a great theme too.

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Carol Gall 04 December 2009

lovely fay no bounds 10

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Ian Bowen 04 December 2009

Fay, nice tight piece, written with care.10/10 Regards, Ian

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Daniel Kempson 04 December 2009

Nice write Fay, lovely flow to this romantic piece 10 Daniel

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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