Love On A Hillside Comments
He recalled the first time he saw her
Dressed up in pink ribbons and lace
No she wasn't the fairest of damsels
Looking shy and so out of place
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A story of love and tragedy told in eloquent finesse. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
Your rhythm and rhyme are immaculate and being unforced the verses flow like a silken stream. Your story has such charm and draw. 10++++++++++++++++++ and onto my favorite poem list
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7/21/2025 8:28:33 PM # 1.0.0
What a beautiful way of putting things in order and such a lucid style of poem that flows itself like a mountainous stream. Loved the poet in you. 10++++
I feel so blessed by your nice comment. Thank you ever so much.