rigidity of homosapians perpetuates unmasked
dream continues unabsolved at alter of eternity
time persuades onto last dregs of desire fulfilled
mortality of life forms whacks on inelastic
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In spite of physical evolution human nature has not yet evolved adequately is quite true to infer from your poem fine!
Maybe...yesterday is divine's opportunity to start all over again including love. thanks amazing mind.
[1] glory of evolution entreats being enlightened… [2] belief of atheism or theism yet rebuffs divine… [3] are we not same from yesterday to tomorrow? [1]Evolution is but Self Seeking [Psychic Evolution…Supra Mental Power of Sri Aravindo…requires rigorous finer exercise] …mundane evolution is auto piloted [2] Well to a locus one has to anchor hang parliament [read hang psyche] is topsy turvy … higgledy-piggledy [3] it depends what one wants to choose …like amoeba chose to stay unicellular instead of myriad multi cellular…but just before this you wrote ‘from relevance to irrelevance acyclic quest of religion bewilders cyclic’…relevance and irrelevance are the then state of mind and grasping…here you’ve made a stout satire .. Over all your poetry stirs the psyche to think and rethink…in myriad logics and counter logics…indeed great teaching and joy and experience to savor…thanks Dada Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10