rigidity of homosapians perpetuates unmasked
dream continues unabsolved at alter of eternity
time persuades onto last dregs of desire fulfilled
mortality of life forms whacks on inelastic
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''dream continues unabsolved at alter of eternity'' excellent philosophical poem, thank you for sharing 10/10/10
Fascinating study of the nature of human beings with regard to love. You ask some very good questions here! Well written.
From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.
LOVE OF TOMORROW ........Is a very excellent thoughts. thanks for sharing this poem.......10+ regards Ezna
Excellent... outlook on the love of tomorrow. congrats and regards sandhya
Dr.Kar Sir. This is a good poem. Very strong imagery
Dr. Kar, past events that were beyond my control, since I was not around to do so, remains behind as just a part of the past...Nothing is left that will gratifies the soul more than to keep moving on, hoping that things will go through the rightful ways... Dr, Kar, Love is love, manifested in different ways in different times, but, nevertheless, Love is love, creation of the mighty God, great philosophical statament, you got my vote! Keep it up, God Bless You! , Love and Peace, Romeo
A Phylosophical Rendering of Questions, that have intriqued mankind, since, yesterday, today and ' Tomorrow '... A Rythmic Flow of deep ideas... Nicely put to pen... MoonBee
A profound and philosphic write Dr. Kar....the past gives way for the future..10++
A profound and philosphic write Dr. Kar....the past gives way for the future..10++
Yesterdays are gone but evolution continues and tomorrow is new with hope. A very philosophical, intelligent and interesting poem. 10 love Karin
Your poetry is presented like a mosaic of words that create a vision original and always unexpected. Your theme is universal - Your love of language is passionate and infectious. Wonderful poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
deep poetry.. fine poetry.. i like the poetry.. not all are the same :)
As we look through our window of the past to get a glimpse of tommorow we can not only see but dream of what will be. Good write Dr. Kar. Keep up the good work. Your friend Lynn
Very nicely written and the flow was smooth. Excellent job the wisdom of your words ring truth.
wow a nice poem to reflect on yesterday is past and tomorrow is awaiting for something new lets hope its for our best good theme and composition -10 anjali (do read mine A CUPPA COFFEE WITH YOU)
Your poems well expressed, every line is written beautifully, a poem of its own.. like them, are also challenging for my too simple mind, but yes I think you're right..love itself does never change..(We are..)