Trust divine as love embedded in truth
as day descends slowly by the light
moments rill on faltering art of darkness
listless yet heretical words tossed up
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i have no idea what the poem is about but thats probably because of my lack of education with vocabulary... i do feel alot of emotions and passion merging out of each verse... it brought tears to my eyes... beautifully written :)
Very touching poem, beautifully crafted.A great feelings..
So deep is the love of tears expressed in a nice poetical manner.
Exceptional! Love and tears linked together along this sojourn.
lovely poem even when one is very happy there can be tears of joy......... i like your style dear Shub its an unique one-you are really original and dont seem to be influenced by any other poet unlike me--I can be influenced by justttttt any one here maybe someday I'll write a sequel to yoursss till then-have a good day a tenner from me anjali
''space flickers by dwarf memories on threshold of intimacy from crowd who knows tomorrow may reconcile'' these are simple lines but great impact to readers..so nice, so touching, so gentle to the ears of the readers..smileeeeee
A poem which touches your heart.....eloquent...and poignant.
A poignant piece embellished with extraordinary metaphors and a very rich vocabulary 10
interesting visual metaphor into fossils of kisses in impregnation interesting metaphorical poem, very well written 10/10/10 Mary
I agree with the ladies below, you have manufactured a very beautiful poem, written it seems with some hint of pragmatism. You have touched on love and truth, yet ends with a Love of Tears. Good write Doc, I liked it extreamely well. Your friend Lynn
Beauty, your word are liquid rubies. 'as heart loses gentle grace by adulation'
touching.... all the verses are very touching... words create a very vivid picture of a lost love.... from a wonderful words of metaphors to a beautiful and touching pictures of a lost love.. amazing way of expressing feelings through very amazing and impressive words.. words from a very brilliant, poetic mind.... As always, you never fail to impress us with your superb vocabulary, superb poetry.... Thanks for sharing.... 10+++ Maia
Feeling spilling tolling [Ring slowly] on my psyche …and waiting for billing…[free] The price is Pure Joy Thanks for such a poem….words are to me dumb and fossilized sorry.. 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK