Love Of My Life... Comments

hmmm b'ful poem writen from the core of heart..soft poem..romantic approach..an expectation of a gal at her age..of some beloved..excellent done.. silence communicated..here again..10 again.

'who can hear my silence more than my words' ' I will die for the person, who will live for me' Simple lines, yet they possess some deep beauty. Your works do come from the heart. A very pleasing and life - filled poem. I hope you write more and get better. And I, like numerous others, hope you find your true love.

Wishing the love game a grand success.

Well Sim you are for sure in the right Ball Park....Stay around and keep Writing. Kind Regards Philip

Dear SIM, May you find a person who is true and forever remains devoted to you! My best wishes are always with you! -Raj

u gave voice to everyone's simple wish!

Very nice poem.. good luck in your search, , I hope you may like my poems and they bring to you a smile...Take care..

good poem i hope you find him

A lot of strict specifications you list out there...better invite quotations competetive! a poem very pleasing to read...dreams and visions of a young sim(ple) heart! good piece Sim...i liked...10

great job :) :) i like your poem :) :)

nicely written..n well imagined..10+++

wishing you all the best